edit my final paper
Good first draft. Great references.
1- Make sure your formatting and page breaks look OK.
2- Check capitalization and spelling.
3- Check punctuations.
4- I would suggest adding a conclusion.
I hope this helps. Thanks
SOME NOTES FROM THE WRITING CENTER:
I added an example from the writing center: INTEXT CITATION.
1- Sources with more than 3 authors are cited as follows. In the case of this source (Uppal et al., 2013) Citations do not include the first or middle initial of the authors. Make sure that you work through all your citations and remove the first initials from the author.
Uppal, A., Evans, L., Chitkara, N., Patrawalla, P., Mooney, M. A., Addrizzo-Harris, D., … & Tsay, J. C. 2013
2- APA style requires that your reference page be alphabetized beginning with the source the author of which (whether the author is a person or a group) has the first alphabetical name and ending with the last. Make sure you reorganize the reference list so they are alphabetical
The only portion of a reference entry that should be italicized is the title of a book or journal. Article titles are not italicized