add more details on an existing essay studying abroad

Hello,

I want you to read this essay and add more details that make sense and fits with what is already written. Add more details to the intro and all other paragraphs and change some words/sentences if necessary. **But don’t change what the essay is about** it is about the challenges I faced and what i learned from studying abroad.

Bellow is attached the essay. Please read the essay fully THEN start to apply changes and add more words and ideas. *Has to be 750 words*

Thank you