english revising summary paragraph

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(A)

  • Below are links to “Eliminating Wordiness Exercise 1” and “Eliminating Wordiness Exercise 2.”

EXERCISE 1

https://owl.purdue.edu/owl_exercises/sentence_style/eliminating_wordiness_test/eliminating_wordiness_exercise_1.html

EXERCISE 2

https://owl.purdue.edu/owl_exercises/sentence_style/eliminating_wordiness_test/eliminating_wordiness_exercise_2.html

(B)

Do a self-review of the application paragraph draft you wrote and submitted to eLearning in Week #4. You’ll be re-submitting that paragraph, but with marginal notes that indicate your evaluation of the paragraph according to the grading criteria in the rubric.

(C)

  • Please revise your summary paragraph according to your self-review and instructor feedback.
  • After you have revised the paragraph, submit it to GGU’s OWL tutors . Select “Grammar and Mechanics” as the category you’d like feedback on.