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My teacher corrected my first draft and put comments on it, so I want you guys to correct whatever my teacher wants and especially add a section for the history of obesity with these sources that my teacher wants me to use :

Please use these sources to write about the previous findings section.

Brewis, Alexandra A. Obesity: Cultural and Biocultural Perspectives. Rutgers University Press, 2010.

Gilman, Sander L. Obesity: The Biography. OUP Oxford, 2010.

Ali, Naheed. The Obesity Reality: A Comprehensive Approach to a Growing Problem. Rowman & Littlefield Publishers, 2012.

Friedman, Lauri S. Obesity. Greenhaven Press/Gale Cengage Learning, 2010.

I also have instructions for draft number 2, so please do your best to follow instructions and feel free to ask me anything. I NEED A MINIMUM OF 2500 WORDS. And I need you to carefully read through the instructions. My essay is already around 1500 words, so you are just missing about 1000 words.

PLEASE DO NOT FORGET ABOUT IN TEXT CITATIONS AND TO USE PROPER MLA FORMAT!