Please write an essay addressing the following question:

Why is face to face communication important?

Make sure to skip lines, indent paragraphs, you must integrate one paraphrase and one quote (minimum) into your essay from the article. Do not forget the in-text citation. Start with a brainstom and outline.

So above is the requirement and question. I have already done the essay, but my professor have some comment based on my first draft. Please review the photos, the comment from my professor is inside the pages. If you can’t see it, please ask me.

So I hope can make some changes on my first draft (docx).