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THIS IS THE FEEDBACK THAT THE PROFESSOR SENT TO ME. PLEASE ANWSER QUESTION FULLY!! MY WRITING ACTIVITY IS ATTACHED BELOW AS WELL.

Hello Sarah: Thanks for sharing these quality initiatives here. Your sincerity shines in thi value-added proposal; well done! Your proposal is on-track! I do see solid and credible resources; your plans are progressing very well here. Consider these enhancements as you continue with the next draft: (1) Improved “persuasive writing” can be met by reviewing this link: http://lrs.ed.uiuc.edu/students/fwalters/cohere.ht… (2) Note an approach to writing community issue essay: http://faculty.fullerton.edu/jcho/essay5.htm (3) APA formatting: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/01… (4) Review course material for APA guidelines and sample papers. (5) review “Student Center” tab for APA guidelines and sample papers, and note “Instructor Insights” in the weekly tabs.

PLEASE ANWSER QUESTIONS BELOW!!

#1) Explain how you used feedback from Writing Activity 1 to improve Writing Activity 2.

#2) Discuss how the feedback on Writing Activity 1 will help you with future writing.