rhetorical analysis essay about paper amp quot effective human resource management as tool for organizational success amp quot

I need you fix grammar and add more detail, cite on my paper.

need at least 4-5 pages more than 1500 words.

I will give sample of my professor and my first draft.

the article:

https://www.researchgate.net/publication/309266834_Effective_Human_Resource_Management_As_Tool_For_Organizational_Success