Please review the comments on the attached research paper by the instructor and make the necessary changes.
Please see the below comments also made by the instructor on the research paper
You are making really good progress here…but the writing needs clarification on a few points…see the attached prospectus with my comments. I think you have the main components needed here; however, the writing needs some significant work. I would like to see you revise the first couple of sections…and work on the RQ to ensure they match…and then we can more closely evaluate the remainder of the prospectus.