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Your RIP essay is essentially performing RA on your RIP Project. Thus, it needs to include the same claim-evidence-analysis sequence as your RA essay. You must make several distinct arguable claims about what rhetorical strategies you used in your RIP Project (incorporating the rhetorical triangle), follow up each claim with evidence (where/how you did this in your text) and analysis (why your evidence shows your claim to be true). You should definitely be identifying your target audience and arguing for how you made specific rhetorical choices to appeal to them at some point.

This is also true for the Intro Essay: make sure you have made several clear, arguable claims about your overall course progress, follow them up with evidence (from your artifacts) and analysis.